The
storm clouds rolled in that Tuesday morning, nothing too out of the ordinary
for a day in late summer. The day began as it always does here down south, but
when it was over and nighttime was upon us, nothing would ever be the same
again. As the minutes went by, the sky grew darker and darker, casting an
ominous shadow on our world. Being an avid news watcher, the Channel 3 station
was on as usual. Drinking my daily cup of coffee, I listened closely to the
newscasters. I’ve never paid much attention to the weather maps that the
meteorologists show that was until then.
I was fascinated by the fact that our city seemed so miniscule compared
the large dark green orb that hovered about the words New Orleans on the
weather tracker. It did not look like it was leaving anytime soon, but in fact
moving more and more inland. Once the rain started it seemed endless, and to
us, it was.
Every
weekday, for the last four years, after the news concluded, Live with Regis and
Kelly was what I tuned in to. But not that day, there was no time to watch my
daily talk show; it was more important and necessary that the news continued. By
now, inches of rain had already fallen, slightly flooding the streets and
creating puddles in the grass. The newscasters warned of the approaching
weather. We were no longer facing a tropical storm but a hurricane, one with
the name Katrina. “Stay indoors” and “ Don’t leave your home unless absolutely
necessary”, they warned. The urgency in their voices and the fear in their eyes
grew with each passing moment. A stage one hurricane became stage two, then
three, then four, and when Katrina finally made landfall, it was a stage five
hurricane.
By
4:00 pm, Tuesday, August 23, 2005, I was bunkered down in the attic of my quaint
row home. The power had been out for quite sometime now. The only things I
heard were the sound of rain pounding against the window and the faint buzz of
an old radio I hoped would work. I was
alone and scared. My world was dark; it
seemed like there was no light or hope anywhere. Water had made its way into
the fist floor; it was like a scene from The Titanic. Time went on, but nothing
seemed to change, the storm was still present and he water was still rising. Never in my fifty-two years of life have I
ever been this terrified. I closed my eyes, praying it would be over, and, just
as the torrential rain had came, it was gone. I looked out the window, and
where my street once was, there was now a river. Roofs and treetops peeked
above the lake that encompassed the whole neighborhood. As far as my eye could
see, all there once was was water.
For
five days I stayed in that dark attic, trapped, hoping rescuers would come. On
Sunday, I woke up to the sound of unfamiliar voices yelling something I
couldn’t clearly hear. I stepped out onto my roof to see what it was, and to my
surprise and relief, it was a red kayak, making its way towards me. The water
level almost reached the roof. Our city was drowning, but I was one of the
lucky ones. Devastation was everywhere, houses were destroyed and so were
families. Life as we once knew it was gone, submerged under twenty feet of
water. New Orleans, though damaged, was not broken. We would recover, though,
fewer in numbers, but greater in strength. Today, eight years later, the
remains of Katrina can be seen in the plots of land where houses were unable to
be rebuilt, the water lines on some buildings, and mainly in the hearts of the
survivors.
Glacier Gab,
ReplyDeleteYou tricked us with your title :). Your narrator sounds like he or she's in good shape for 55. Five days in the attic... I'd love it if you want to work on this piece and add details about those five days. Think of Anne Frank. A lot goes on in someone's head when they are trapped and potentially facing death.
You and many others chose to write in the first person (using 'I'). I wonder if this is because "My Abandonment" is written in the first person, or whether it's easier to "enter" the stories we invent, if we enter as "I."
Great job. Katrina will stay in North American minds for a long, long time. If you were to develop this story, you might entertain why...
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