We
had been warned about the storm but never expected it to be anything like this.
My mother, my mother’s boyfriend, Brian, my sister, Jaine and my baby brother,
Evan sat at the dining room table with my grandparents in silence. No one knew
what to say. The only thing we could think of was the storm and that was the
last thing anyone wanted to talk about. It was our first real meal since before
the storm, in our home. I should say “what was our home.” Our home is gone. Nothing
is left except a trashed, lifeless yard.
Let
me rewind a bit. My name is Chelsea and I’m 20 years old. My family and I were
directly affected by a horrifying, destroying storm called Hurricane Sandy. Our
home in Rumson, New Jersey was completely destroyed. The day before the storm
came we decided to go stay at my grandparents’ house. My mom insisted that we
go there just in case. My family and I weren't too scared of the storm. We've experienced hurricanes before and the beforehand warnings always turn out to be
completely exaggerated. For some reason my mom just had a bad feeling about
this one. Well, she was right. Little did I know, Hurricane Sandy would be the
most destructive, life-ruining storm, my family and most people would
experience in their whole life time.
We
hid out in my grandparents’ house for about a week. We didn't have much access
to the news because my grandparents’ house was powerless for the whole week and
a half. Powerless sounds rough but at least we were safe. I never expected to
see my home the way I saw it when I returned after a week and a half. There was
no home left for me to look at. It was a pile of bits of the house and trash
and an empty yard. There were pieces of the roof and some furniture and
belongings left around, destroyed. Even my brother Evan, only 3 looked
extremely confused. Jaine and my mother were hysterically crying. Brian just
shook his head back and forth. Me, I had no response at all. I was still in
complete utter shock. My mom tried to pick out belongings that we could save. I didn't even bother. It was too hard for me. Who knew that nature could do such a
thing?
It’s
been a month and a week since the storm. We aren't doing as bad as I predicted.
We have been staying at my grandparents’ house. We’re eating our first meal
together since the storm. Things are still pretty awkward. I am writing this as
I sit at the dinner table. We will be moving into an apartment that the
government is providing for us, since we lost everything. Our move in date is
exactly two weeks from today. It will be nice for us to finally have a place to
live again but I don’t think my family and I will ever be able to call it “home.”
This was a wake-up call, for my family and I. Nature is not always our friend.
Alexandra,
ReplyDeleteI really like that your narrator couldn't bother to choose what to save. "It was too hard" on her. I also like that your narrator is writing a journal, like the main character in "My Abandonment." This permits us entry into your narrator's mind. You have a lot of freedom to take this story in any direction you may want.
Why do you think so many students wrote about Hurricane Sandy? You could write about anything in nature and fictionalize it. I'm intrigued. It must be that first hand experience of a natural disaster trumps all else?
Spring
Ali,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote in a journal point of view! It really kept it interesting! I wrote about Hurricane Sandy too and the way that it affected my life. I think a lot of students wrote about this because it was a storm that most of us can relate to and it is so fresh is our memories. Anyways, good job!!!
Liv